So I had to sit again to string words as they came in my head? Unfortunately, yes... And unfortunately, out came these chunks of crap...
Tiny people running all over
Parkouring on your features
Soon some will want an entrance
In your mind,
Cold hands
Scorch skin
Warming
Inside you
Delirious
A collection of smells
Define your existence
Detailed
Memory
Can be cruel
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Yes, it is crap in my opinion. Maybe it's some really cool crap but it's crap.
Yes, it is crap in my opinion. Maybe it's some really cool crap but it's crap.
This is good, naice... me likey..
ReplyDeleteGlad that you do. (:
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ReplyDeleteMemory
Can be cruel.
*head nodding at a 60km/hr*
*agrees to the agreement*
ReplyDeleteA collection of smells
ReplyDeleteDefine your existence
Detailed
Memory
Can be cruel
this part is really great....but sadly..didn't get the rest.... :(
you're lucky to get that much, I didn't get any of it...
ReplyDeleteBesides, it's not a part, they are independent actually.
Lol... even I didn't get any of it...but I think it's really deep..
Deletegtalk me. I implore.
ReplyDeleteAah! I have been implored!
ReplyDeletehmm..thats what happened in Lilliput!
ReplyDeleteGullivers Travels..Revisited in 4 lines!
Somehow I liked that COLD hands parts.
Beautiful..
Wonders what beer can do to words..No?
Ahh, alcohol and words indeed make a great combo!
ReplyDeleteparkour is beast, the best kind is over construction sites, illegally hopping unstable concrete blocks and unwieldy cranes.
ReplyDelete"scorch skin"
i love that duo of words.
Construction sites eh? Gotta try that...
ReplyDeleteTo tell the truth, these pieces were actually written as an experiment in how sets of words create imagery which change when they are combined with the previous or latter sets... So you bet I love those words too!
Love it!!
ReplyDelete"Soon some will want an entrance
In your mind,
Let them in?"
Brilliant!
Thanks :D
ReplyDeleteCold hands
ReplyDeleteScorch skin
Warming
Inside you
Delirious
:)
(:
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