Friday, May 14, 2010

MindCrap



So I had to sit again to string words as they came in my head? Unfortunately, yes... And unfortunately, out came these chunks of crap...


Tiny people running all over
Parkouring on your features
Soon some will want an entrance
In your mind, 
Let them in?



Cold hands
Scorch skin
Warming
Inside you 
Delirious


A collection of smells
Define your existence
Detailed 
Memory
Can be cruel


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NesQuarX 
Yes, it is crap in my opinion. Maybe it's some really cool crap but it's crap.

17 comments:

  1. Detailed
    Memory
    Can be cruel.

    *head nodding at a 60km/hr*

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  2. A collection of smells
    Define your existence
    Detailed
    Memory
    Can be cruel


    this part is really great....but sadly..didn't get the rest.... :(

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  3. you're lucky to get that much, I didn't get any of it...


    Besides, it's not a part, they are independent actually.

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    1. Lol... even I didn't get any of it...but I think it's really deep..

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  4. hmm..thats what happened in Lilliput!
    Gullivers Travels..Revisited in 4 lines!
    Somehow I liked that COLD hands parts.
    Beautiful..

    Wonders what beer can do to words..No?

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  5. Ahh, alcohol and words indeed make a great combo!

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  6. parkour is beast, the best kind is over construction sites, illegally hopping unstable concrete blocks and unwieldy cranes.

    "scorch skin"

    i love that duo of words.

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  7. Construction sites eh? Gotta try that...

    To tell the truth, these pieces were actually written as an experiment in how sets of words create imagery which change when they are combined with the previous or latter sets... So you bet I love those words too!

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  8. Love it!!

    "Soon some will want an entrance
    In your mind,
    Let them in?"

    Brilliant!

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  9. Cold hands
    Scorch skin
    Warming
    Inside you
    Delirious

    :)

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